I am a Year 6 student at papakura central school School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room Khh and my teacher is Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wow Hayley excellent work this week thank you for sharing! I think you made some excellent points about the environment in your writing. Make sure you check back through for capital letters. Thank you for using pictures to help explain your maths thinking. Your create options are outstanding ! Wow what creative art you made with your food! It looks yum as well! Miss Hudson
Hello Hayley. It's amazing all the work you have done. I really like the ideas for why farming is bad for the environment. Have you looked at your spelling and fixed it?
Good Morning Hayley. Good job on your work i liked the maths the most how you put it after it instead of cluttering it up on one slide next time i think you should work on putting more info on the muffins and you should maybe work on your spelling to because at the very beginning of your muffins writing you got flour wrong you spelled it four. But good job on your work. Come check out my blog.
Ki Ora Hayley. I really like your writing about the farm, I also liked your procedure about your muffins. I also wanted to known how many degrees do we have to bake it. Nice work hayley
Wow Hayley excellent work this week thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteI think you made some excellent points about the environment in your writing. Make sure you check back through for capital letters. Thank you for using pictures to help explain your maths thinking. Your create options are outstanding ! Wow what creative art you made with your food! It looks yum as well!
Miss Hudson
Hello Hayley.
ReplyDeleteIt's amazing all the work you have done. I really like the ideas for why farming is bad for the environment. Have you looked at your spelling and fixed it?
Good Morning Hayley.
ReplyDeleteGood job on your work i liked the maths the most how you put it after it instead of cluttering it up on one slide next time i think you should work on putting more info on the muffins and you should maybe work on your spelling to because at the very beginning of your muffins writing you got flour wrong you spelled it four. But good job on your work. Come check out my blog.
Ki Ora Hayley.
ReplyDeleteI really like your writing about the farm, I also liked your procedure about your muffins. I also wanted to known how many degrees do we have to bake it. Nice work hayley