I am a Year 6 student at papakura central school School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room Khh and my teacher is Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Hayley, I liked your food review and it sounds like you really enjoyed the pani popo. Remember next time to check your spelling, you could even ask a buddy to help you edit. Also remember to add a description of your post at the beginning so the reader knows what they will be looking at, as well as a closing question to make this a quality blog post.
Hi Hayley, I liked your food review and it sounds like you really enjoyed the pani popo. Remember next time to check your spelling, you could even ask a buddy to help you edit. Also remember to add a description of your post at the beginning so the reader knows what they will be looking at, as well as a closing question to make this a quality blog post.
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