I am a Year 6 student at papakura central school School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room Khh and my teacher is Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Nice work this week Hayley. You have done a great job answering the questions for the 'must read' text, I can tell you understood the text well. Next time for your human body DLO, I would make sure that it is big enough to read through your blog post, and make sure your paragraphs of information have subheadings too.
I really like how you added the your writing plan, it looks like you understood how to structure an explanation piece of writing. Your writing flows nicely and you have used paragraphs correctly.
Nice work this week Hayley. You have done a great job answering the questions for the 'must read' text, I can tell you understood the text well. Next time for your human body DLO, I would make sure that it is big enough to read through your blog post, and make sure your paragraphs of information have subheadings too.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you added the your writing plan, it looks like you understood how to structure an explanation piece of writing. Your writing flows nicely and you have used paragraphs correctly.