I am a Year 6 student at papakura central school School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room Khh and my teacher is Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Fantastic work this week. I like how you only showed the texts you read during this week and your dream holiday create.
I also like how you structured your writing this week. Did you do any research for this? If you did you could have used some of this research to support you statements. For example, in your first paragraph you mentioned we have the Delta variant in New Zealand. You could have used research to explain why this variant is so dangerous. Make sure you double check your spelling and grammar before publishing, maybe even getting a family member to help you edit your work.
Kia ora Hayley,
ReplyDeleteFantastic work this week. I like how you only showed the texts you read during this week and your dream holiday create.
I also like how you structured your writing this week. Did you do any research for this? If you did you could have used some of this research to support you statements. For example, in your first paragraph you mentioned we have the Delta variant in New Zealand. You could have used research to explain why this variant is so dangerous. Make sure you double check your spelling and grammar before publishing, maybe even getting a family member to help you edit your work.