I am a Year 6 student at papakura central school School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room Khh and my teacher is Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ka rawe Hayley!!! Awesome work this week. You have completed these tasks well and I can tell you worked hard. I especially like the slide of the extra work you have done this week. The video of you playing the ukulele and singing is wonderful. Next time make sure your opening statement for you writing does not include points you are writing about in your paragraphs. For example you opening statement could have included "what is kapa haka" as that introduces the topic clearly.
Ka rawe Hayley!!! Awesome work this week. You have completed these tasks well and I can tell you worked hard. I especially like the slide of the extra work you have done this week. The video of you playing the ukulele and singing is wonderful. Next time make sure your opening statement for you writing does not include points you are writing about in your paragraphs. For example you opening statement could have included "what is kapa haka" as that introduces the topic clearly.
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