Purpose: Persuade
Audience: Everyone on my blog
RT:Use key words about the topic to follow up sentences
Why is music better than sports?
Today I am going to talk about, why music is better then sports? Here are some reasons that I am going to tell you about.
Firstly I am going to tell you about why music is good. If you like music then you can listen to music. You can learn how to play an instrument. Music is calming. You can enjoy socializing when you join a band. When you listen to music it is calming to listen to. You can listen to music when you want to. When you play sports you get tired.
So you can learn an instrument, then you can play with people. You can play awesome music. You can record it. Then you can start a YouTube chance when you are 13. You can relax when you listen to your music.
I think that music is calming. you can do sports while you are listening to music. You can go for a run and listen to music. Music can make you feel different moods. You can listen to rock music or calming music. There can be different types.
I think that music is better then sports but you can have your own opinion. Some people like music and others like sports. These are my reasons why music is better then sports.
Do you like sports or music?
Nice work Hayley. I like some of the points you use as why music is better than sport such as "socialising in a band". Next time make sure you read over your work again before publishing. You have repeated yourself a lot with "Music is calming".
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