I was learning how to right a persuasive letter.
Purpose:persuasive
Audience: everyone
RT:use research to extend my ideas and back up my thinking.
Hayley Ready
23 Ray small drive papakura central school
4th August 2021
Post code 2ll0
Jacinda
4th August
Dear Jacinda,
I am writing to you today because of what happened on Mill Road. The problem is that Mill Road has so many pot holes. When you drive into a pot hole the vehicle goes down. It can also be dangerous. Some people try to miss them but then they accidentally go off road.
They were supposed to fix it but then it got cancelled. The reason why it got cancelled was because they did not have enough money. They used money for the cycling and walking Harbor Bridge. Judith Collines said that Mill Road causes a lot of traffic jams. You can go down there and get stuck for a long time because of the traffic. Those are my reasons on why you need to fix Mill Road.
If you had to right a pursuasive letter who would you right to?
Hi Hayley! Its Leslie I like how you explained why they need to fix the pot holes in Mill Road but maybe you should explain the good and bad things about the cyclng and walking Harbor bridge because they might of had a reason why they used the money to make that place instead of fixng Mill Road.
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