I am a Year 6 student at papakura central school School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room Khh and my teacher is Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Nice work Hayley. I noticed you did not add any photos of your mash-up house, will this be uploaded later?
I like how you clearly showed your working our for your chosen maths questions, maybe next week you could pick some more questions to answer?
I like how you created a teleporting car, I think that would be a very useful form of transportation. Maybe next time you could have included a look into how it teleports. Does it have special controls on the steering wheel? What would that look liked?
I also think you could have changed your jingle slightly as it is the same as your billboard, you also could have made the background music for it.
Hello hayley I like you STEAM teleport car but maybe at the end maybe you can show what create you did and show us
ReplyDeleteHey Hayley !
ReplyDeleteI like your Billboard and how you kept the words short. Next time maybe you could change your background ?
Nice work Hayley. I noticed you did not add any photos of your mash-up house, will this be uploaded later?
ReplyDeleteI like how you clearly showed your working our for your chosen maths questions, maybe next week you could pick some more questions to answer?
I like how you created a teleporting car, I think that would be a very useful form of transportation. Maybe next time you could have included a look into how it teleports. Does it have special controls on the steering wheel? What would that look liked?
I also think you could have changed your jingle slightly as it is the same as your billboard, you also could have made the background music for it.