I am a Year 6 student at papakura central school School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room Khh and my teacher is Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Nice work this week Hayley. You did a great job completing the reading tasks and I enjoyed reading the timeline you had created for Pablo Picasso. You also have done a good job answering the maths questions and I like how you showed us your maths thinking. The sculptures you have made for the STEAM art project look great. Maybe next time you could write a short description explaining how this piece of art represents the Papakura area. I also enjoyed reading your writing task this week. I thought the idea you had was very creative. Just make sure you double check your editing, sometimes reading a story out loud can help you notice when you need to add more full stops.
Nice work this week Hayley. You did a great job completing the reading tasks and I enjoyed reading the timeline you had created for Pablo Picasso. You also have done a good job answering the maths questions and I like how you showed us your maths thinking.
ReplyDeleteThe sculptures you have made for the STEAM art project look great. Maybe next time you could write a short description explaining how this piece of art represents the Papakura area.
I also enjoyed reading your writing task this week. I thought the idea you had was very creative. Just make sure you double check your editing, sometimes reading a story out loud can help you notice when you need to add more full stops.
Great job Hayley and you are in the same class as my sister
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